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#1🔢🟡 ConsiderSymptom numbering on the cards
✏️ What's wrong
The on-screen symptom cards run #1 Vision → #2 Numbness → #3 Balance → #4 Urinary → #5 Fatigue. That’s internally consistent (double vision is folded under #1 Vision), so it’s not an error — just confirm this 5-item numbering is the intended sequence.
Flagged only because the VO lists double vision as a distinct symptom; the cards deliberately merge it. No fix needed unless you want them to match.
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🖼🟢 OKIntro Title Card / Agenda Questions: “What are the typical MS symptoms? / What does …”
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What are the typical MS symptoms? / What does a relapse look like?
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💬 VO at this moment“In Greek, manifestation means symptom. That's why we always say a symptom of multiple sclerosis.”
MS SYMPTOMS / Typical Symptoms / Atypical Symptoms
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💬 VO at this moment“initially when a characteristic symptom appears we immediately think could this person have MS so what's typical for MS first is decreased vision in one eye”
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card (Symptom Header): “SYMPTOM #1: VISION PROBLEMS”
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SYMPTOM #1: VISION PROBLEMS
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💬 VO at this moment“this vision loss can present in completely different ways for example a dark spot may appear in your visual field in the center or off to the side”
🖼🟢 OKSymptom Term Card (Title + Bullet List + Medical-Term Label): “DECREASED VISION / Curtain or gray film effect…”
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DECREASED VISION / Curtain or gray film effect / Altered color perception / Flashes of light, glare / Dark spot in visual field / MEDICAL TERM: OPTIC NEURITIS
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💬 VO at this moment“The next characteristic symptom is double vision. For instance, out of nowhere you start seeing horizontal image separation, or as patients”
2/15 / DOUBLE VISION / Horizontal image separation / Changes with head position / Can be FIRST SIGN OF MS || (b) 2/15 / DOUBLE VISION / Horizontal image separation / Changes with head position / [B-roll captions] Corrected Vision · Double Vision
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Confirm rights for the eye comparison B-roll (or swap it).
Separate the “Corrected Vision” / “Double Vision” captions so they don’t overlap.
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💬 VO at this moment“Numbness in an arm or leg, fingers or the entire limb, clumsiness when performing movements.”
BrandsThe eye-condition comparison B-roll used around 1:40–1:47 (“Corrected Vision” vs “Double Vision”) is third-party reference footage. Confirm we have the rights, or replace it with our own / a licensed clip.
LayoutOn that comparison B-roll the burnt-in source captions “Corrected Vision” and “Double Vision” sit close together at the centre seam — reposition so they don’t collide.
💬 VO at this moment“Numbness in an arm or leg, fingers or the entire limb, clumsiness when performing movements. You used to perform fine motor movements quite well, but now there's some awkwardness.”
🖼🟢 OKTerm/List Card (Symptom List With B-Roll Thumbnail): “3/15 / HAND SYMPTOMS / Numbness of fingers or …”
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3/15 / HAND SYMPTOMS / Numbness of fingers or entire limb / Loss of fine motor control / Arm weakness
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💬 VO at this moment“And of course, limb weakness. Often it's leg weakness or numbness that comes on suddenly.”
🖼🟢 OKTerm/List Card (Symptom List) With B-Roll Gait Inset: “3/15 / LEG SYMPTOMS / Leg weakness or numbness…”
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3/15 / LEG SYMPTOMS / Leg weakness or numbness / Limping on one leg / Heaviness when walking
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💬 VO at this moment“You might notice you're limping on one leg, or a feeling of heaviness in the legs when walking. These are the main manifestations, symptoms that are quite characteristic of multiple”
💬 VO at this moment“multiple sclerosis. There are rarer symptoms, not as typical for MS. These symptoms can also appear at disease onset or later.”
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card (Symptom Counter): “SYMPTOM #4: URINARY DYSFUNCTION”
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SYMPTOM #4: URINARY DYSFUNCTION
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💬 VO at this moment“Another less common initial manifestation of MS is urinary dysfunction. dysfunction. Most often, urinary problems are a symptom that appears later in more advanced”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card / Symptom List (Lower-Left Title + Bullets Over Talking-Head): “MS-RELATED URINARY DYSFUNCTION / • Sudden, com…”
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MS-RELATED URINARY DYSFUNCTION / • Sudden, commanding need / • No gradual buildup
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💬 VO at this moment“and they literally have to run. That's how strong this urge is. This is called urinary urgency,”
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card (Symptom Counter): “SYMPTOM #5: FATIGUE”
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SYMPTOM #5: FATIGUE
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💬 VO at this moment“Another fairly characteristic sign, but one that often escapes the attention of both doctors and patients, is what we call fatigue. Persistent fatigue. It can hit you during the day and not”
🖼🟢 OKPatient Quote / Pull-Quote Lower-Third: “Patient quote: / "I HAD TO QUIT MY JOB BECAUSE…”
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Patient quote: / "I HAD TO QUIT MY JOB BECAUSE OF FATIGUE"
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💬 VO at this moment“something easier because the fatigue was always with me this is also a characteristic sign if it occurs in a young person it needs to be investigated”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Diagram (Aging Silhouettes On A 0-80 Age Axis) + Segment Counter: “6/15 / 0 10 20 30 40 50 60 70 80”
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6/15 / 0 10 20 30 40 50 60 70 80
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💬 VO at this moment“characteristic sign if it occurs in a young person it needs to be investigated Although there are also atypical presentations. For example, MS can even debut with an epileptic”
Age axis: 0 10 20 30 40 50 60 70 80 (orange highlight band + orange "20" and "40" labels + orange standing figure at 30) / YOUNG PERSON + UNEXPLAINED FATIGUE = GET CHECKED / corner counter 6/15
✏️ What's wrong
Align the highlighted age band with the VO: either tighten the graphic to 20–30, or (more medically accurate) keep 20–40 and adjust the VO. Don’t leave them contradicting.
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💬 VO at this moment“characteristic sign if it occurs in a young person it needs to be investigated Although there are also atypical presentations. For example, MS can even debut with an epileptic”
ConsistencyThe age-onset diagram highlights the band ~20–40 (orange ticks at 20·30·40, figure at 30), but the voiceover says “between 20 and 30”. Screen and VO don’t match.
Fact-checkNote: 20–40 is actually the broader real MS-onset range, so the cleaner fix may be to align the VO to 20–40 rather than narrow the graphic to 20–30 — your call.
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card: “Atypical Presentations”
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Atypical Presentations
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💬 VO at this moment“Although there are also atypical presentations. For example, MS can even debut with an epileptic seizure or with rarer neurological symptoms. In any case, I'll put it this way. If a young”
🖼🟢 OKBulleted List With Warning Callout: “RARE SYMPTOMS LIST: / • Epileptic seizures / •…”
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RARE SYMPTOMS LIST: / • Epileptic seizures / • Other neurological symptoms / ⚠ Age 20-30 = RISK GROUP
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💬 VO at this moment“thinking, could this be MS? You need to see at least a neurologist and not wait for it to go away. And I have a strong request. If a neurologist examined you and said it's”
🖼🟢 OKCta Card (Icon + Two-Line Directive): “DON'T WAIT — / SEE A NEUROLOGIST”
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DON'T WAIT — / SEE A NEUROLOGIST
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💬 VO at this moment“to go away. And I have a strong request. If a neurologist examined you and said it's degenerative disc disease, please get a second opinion to make sure this arm numbness is”
🖼🟢 OKCta / Advice Card (Warning Icon + Headline): “GET A SECOND OPINION”
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GET A SECOND OPINION
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💬 VO at this moment“Feel free to share in the comments the symptoms that are characteristic for you.”
🖼🟢 OKCta (Comment Prompt With Speech-Bubble Icon And Green Down Arrow): “SHARE YOUR SYMPTOMS IN COMMENTS”
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SHARE YOUR SYMPTOMS IN COMMENTS
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💬 VO at this moment“Feel free to share in the comments the symptoms that are characteristic for you. Multiple sclerosis doesn't typically progress in a constant, steady manner.”
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card: “MS Course: Relapses & Remissions”
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MS Course: Relapses & Remissions
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💬 VO at this moment“Multiple sclerosis doesn't typically progress in a constant, steady manner. It's characterized by a relapsing, remitting course.”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Line Graph (Disability Vs Time) With Color Legend: “(!) Not constant — COMES IN WAVES / Disability…”
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(!) Not constant — COMES IN WAVES / Disability / Time / Relapse / Worsening (incomplete recovery) / Active without worsening / Stable without activity / New lesions on MRI
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💬 VO at this moment“vision decreased in one eye, an arm went numb, or a leg became weak.”
🖼🟢 OKTerm/Info Card With Labeled Diagram (Relapse Symptoms List + 24-Hour Rule + Day1→Day2 Calendar): “EXAMPLES OF RELAPSE SYMPTOMS: / Vision loss / …”
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EXAMPLES OF RELAPSE SYMPTOMS: / Vision loss / Arm numbness / Leg weakness / KEY: Lasts MORE than 24 HOURS / Day 1 → Day 2 / Symptom Persists
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💬 VO at this moment“relapse, either the disease onset, or if you already have MS, the beginning of a relapse.”
🖼🟢 OKWarning Callout Card (Alert Icon + Headline): “THIS COULD BE A RELAPSE”
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THIS COULD BE A RELAPSE
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💬 VO at this moment“In this situation, you need to see a doctor immediately, preferably an MS specialist,”
🖼🟢 OKCta / Urgent Advisory Card (Alert Icon + Headline): “SEE AN MS SPECIALIST / IMMEDIATELY”
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SEE AN MS SPECIALIST / IMMEDIATELY
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💬 VO at this moment“so they can determine whether this is a relapse or not. And if it is a relapse,”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Process Diagram (3-Step Flow With Icons): “DIAGNOSIS / TREATMENT / FUNCTION RESTORED”
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DIAGNOSIS / TREATMENT / FUNCTION RESTORED
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💬 VO at this moment“the function that brought you to the doctor. The second part of this relapsing-remitting course is remission, when the person feels well or has some lingering issues that bothered them before.”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card: “REMISSION”
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REMISSION
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💬 VO at this moment“is remission, when the person feels well or has some lingering issues that bothered them before.”
9/15 | (!) LONGER REMISSION = LOWER DISABILITY RISK | DISEASE-MODIFYING THERAPIES (DMTS) | (DMTS) | (DMTS) | Disability | Time | Relapse | Worsening (incomplete recovery) | Active without worsening | Stable without activity | New lesions on MRI | Disease-Modifying Therapies (DMTs)
✏️ What's wrong
Make the abbreviation “DMTs” everywhere (title + legend) — drop the all-caps “DMTS”.
Swap the amber “!” on the positive “lower disability risk” line for a neutral/positive cue.
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💬 VO at this moment“The longer we maintain it, the lower the chance of developing a disabling complication in the future. In a person with MS, relapses occur because the immune system at some point becomes activated.”
TypographyAbbreviation casing is inconsistent: the chart title shows “(DMTS)” (all-caps S) while the legend shows “(DMTs)”. Standard form is “DMTs” (lowercase plural s).
Color-meaningAn amber “!” alert icon sits on a positive message (“LONGER REMISSION = LOWER DISABILITY RISK”). The alert colour reads as a warning — consider a neutral/positive marker instead.
🖼🟢 OKSection Title Card: “WHY RELAPSES HAPPEN”
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WHY RELAPSES HAPPEN
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💬 VO at this moment“In a person with MS, relapses occur because the immune system at some point becomes activated. You need to understand that in MS, we're dealing with autoimmunity. The disease doesn't mean the”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card With Labeled Medical Illustration (Autoimmune Attack): “10/15 / (!) AUTOIMMUNE DISEASE / Immune Cell /…”
💬 VO at this moment“time intervals. A sudden immune activation begins. Immune cells enter the brain, start damaging it,”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Diagram (Immune Cell Illustration With "T Cell" Label + Slide Counter): “10/15 / T Cell”
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10/15 / T Cell
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💬 VO at this moment“time intervals. A sudden immune activation begins. Immune cells enter the brain, start damaging it, forming new lesions, and then everything subsides. This entry of immune cells and appearance of new”
🖼🟢 OKLower-Third Caption Over Immune-Cell B-Roll: “NEW LESIONS = RELAPSE”
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NEW LESIONS = RELAPSE
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💬 VO at this moment“lesions, that's what a relapse is. So, a relapse is essentially inflammation within the central nervous system, inflammation within the system. In MS, it doesn't involve the entire brain at once.”
💬 VO at this moment“Certainly, during a relapse these lesions begin to accumulate contrast agent. That's why we do MRI with contrast, to see if there's active inflammation in the brain.”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card / Title Card: “MRI WITH CONTRAST”
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MRI WITH CONTRAST
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💬 VO at this moment“That's why we do MRI with contrast, to see if there's active inflammation in the brain. But why do these lesions accumulate contrast?”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Diagram (3-Step Flow With Icons + Counter): “12/15 / IV CONTRAST / BLOODSTREAM / BRAIN”
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12/15 / IV CONTRAST / BLOODSTREAM / BRAIN
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💬 VO at this moment“The brain is separated from our blood system by what's called the blood-brain barrier. This barrier is completely impermeable to most molecules. But if an area of inflammation develops, then in that area this section of the barrier becomes”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Comparison Table (Normal Vs Inflamed Bbb): “BLOOD-BRAIN BARRIER (BBB) / NORMAL / INFLAMED …”
💬 VO at this moment“permeable and various substances rush in, including the contrast agent. It penetrates into this limited area of the new lesion.”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Mri Diagram (Contrast-Enhanced Brain Scan With Red Label): “12/15 / MS MRI / Contrast Dye”
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12/15 / MS MRI / Contrast Dye
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💬 VO at this moment“And we see this and say, you've developed acute inflammation in the brain in the form of a lesion, and it requires treatment.”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Diagram (Mri Scans) With Warning Headline + Counter: “12/15 / ! ACTIVE LESION = TREATMENT NEEDED / A…”
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12/15 / ! ACTIVE LESION = TREATMENT NEEDED / A / B
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💬 VO at this moment“of a lesion, and it requires treatment. A new lesion forming in the brain or spinal cord carries certain manifestations. These are disruptions along the path of nerve impulses that manifest as movement problems,”
💬 VO at this moment“A new lesion forming in the brain or spinal cord carries certain manifestations. These are disruptions along the path of nerve impulses that manifest as movement problems,”
💬 VO at this moment“typically, or sensory disturbances. So if we start treating the relapse quickly enough, extinguishing this inflammation, the lesion becomes non-inflammatory, movement is restored,”
🖼🟢 OKLabeled Process Diagram (3-Step Recovery Flow With Brain Icons): “13/15 / FAST TREATMENT → INFLAMMATION DOWN → F…”
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13/15 / FAST TREATMENT → INFLAMMATION DOWN → FUNCTION RESTORED
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💬 VO at this moment“First and foremost, we administer methylprednisolone, suppress the inflammation, and the lesion becomes inactive. Function is restored. In addition to actual relapses,”
💬 VO at this moment“there are also so-called pseudo-relapses. How are they different? The key difference is that”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card / Section Title: “PSEUDO-RELAPSE”
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PSEUDO-RELAPSE
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💬 VO at this moment“there are also so-called pseudo-relapses. How are they different? The key difference is that pseudo-relapses last several hours, never more than 24 hours. So if you develop a symptom,”
Re-think the table colours: don’t put the urgent TRUE RELAPSE in reassuring green and the benign pseudo-relapse in alarm red (or make both columns neutral).
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💬 VO at this moment“say some visual flickering or hand numbness, and it lasted one or two hours, three at most,”
Color-meaningColour semantics look inverted: TRUE RELAPSE (the urgent, serious one) has a green header, while PSEUDO-RELAPSE (the benign one) is red. By the danger rule green = good / red = alarm. Consider swapping, or use neutral column colours so green doesn’t signal “the dangerous one is fine”.
🖼🟢 OKTerm/Label Card (Animated State Toggle: "Symptom Appears" With Red Hand Illustration) + Progress Counter: “Symptom / APPEARS / 14/15”
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Symptom / APPEARS / 14/15
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💬 VO at this moment“Then it passed, came back, passed again, and the next day it doesn't appear anymore.”
Symptom APPEARS / GOES AWAY / RETURNS / GONE NEXT DAY / 1 / 2 / 1-3 HOURS MAX, THEN DISAPPEARS
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💬 VO at this moment“This belongs to the pseudo-relapse category. What causes them? In people with MS, this can occur due to stress, typically psycho-emotional stress, overheating,”
💬 VO at this moment“or recent infections. At that moment, a slight MS activation can occur. The person starts feeling some disturbances, then the triggering factor resolves, the emotional”
💬 VO at this moment“relapse a true relapse involves formation of a new lesion contrast enhancement and symptoms lasting more than 24 hours so as soon as you develop”
🖼🟢 OKTerm Card / Checklist (True Relapse Criteria): “TRUE RELAPSE: / ✓ New lesion on MRI / ✓ Contra…”
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TRUE RELAPSE: / ✓ New lesion on MRI / ✓ Contrast enhancement / ✓ Symptoms > 24 hours
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💬 VO at this moment“enhancement and symptoms lasting more than 24 hours so as soon as you develop a first symptom or any new symptoms and they last more than 24 hours don't delay”
🖼🟢 OKCta / Closing Warning Card: “DON'T DELAY! / SYMPTOMS > 24 HOURS / = SEE MS …”
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DON'T DELAY! / SYMPTOMS > 24 HOURS / = SEE MS SPECIALIST
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💬 VO at this moment“relapse is confirmed, immediate therapy initiation to best restore the impaired function.”
🖼🟢 OKClosing End-Card / Takeaway With Green Check: “EARLY TREATMENT / = BETTER RECOVERY”
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EARLY TREATMENT / = BETTER RECOVERY
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📋 What we check — QC checklist (11 points)
Grammar
typos, agreement, punctuation
Typography
double spaces, dash vs hyphen, quotes, non-breaking spaces in numbers, %/№ not glued to a digit
Lists
consistent marker, parallel items, end punctuation, alignment
Layout
overlap on face/edge, clipping, safe-zone, readability
Color-meaning
🟢 good/yes · 🔴 bad/danger — colour matches the meaning
Names
correct spelling + consistency across all mentions
Titles
current, error-free, consistent case
Brands
own brand correct; no stray third-party logos/watermarks/captions
Fact-check
numbers, dates, statistics, medical claims — checked against canon